Peter Albrecht, Danish Institute for International Studies (DIIS) and Copenhagen Business School, focusing on local level implementation of security sector reform (SSR) in Sierra Leone. In your own words, please provide a short outline of the project. The anthology explores Sierra Leone ten years after war with respect to a variety of areas and topics that are central to the recent history of political life and security in the country. Project Does this proposal offer a useful and/or original contribution to the field? Is it addressing any new/emerging areas? In my mind, the most important contribution of the proposal and book chapters that I've seen is that they provide a voice from Sierra Leone on Sierra Leone. A lot of academics from abroad have spoken of and made careers, analyzing and writing about the country (and still are), so I think for that reason, the project is very worthy of publication. It goes without saying, then, that I find the quality of the writing to be sufficiently high to be relevant for a larger audience. The weakness of the proposal is that I am not sure what the 'unique contribution' is or at least I would have sold the project differently, arguing that the project brings new empirical material to the table, and that this is the contribution it makes. In that connection, I think it would be more new to NOT take a point of departure in the war or at least avoid trying to sell the anthology on the basis of Sierra Leone's war 12 years ago. I would also then develop that point as an entry point, because reducing the complexity of Sierra Leone politics nationally and locally to a question of the conflict does not do justice to how that system works. I don't see much theoretical development, particularly in the proposal. This is not a problem for me, but I do think that some academics would find this problematic. I personally also have a problem with statements such 'the book investigates some of the institutions created by the liberal democratization process', because that really also belittles the dynamics and processes of nation-state-formation both at the national and especially at the local level, where the power of chiefs is particularly strong. While I actually do really like the chapter on chieftaincy, it's main arguments, that the way chiefs operate led to tension and possibly conflict and that peacebuilding must take the context into consideration, are not new (Fanthorpe, Richads, Jackson and others have made that argument). I don't have a problem with that, but it should nevertheless be taken into consideration. Obviously, I have not seen the introduction to the book, and there might be an extremely interesting and sophisticated discussion of 'liberal peace' and its implementation, but the book as it's been presented to me comes across more as an empirical contribution than a theoretical one. All of the above said, evaluating the manuscript/book proposal strictly with respect to the topic of discussing liberalization of the political system/security, I have not seen this. I am also learning something new about the different topics that are being discussed while reading the manuscript. Does it adequately engage with recent scholarship? Does it take existing scholarship forward? This relates to the point above about taking the war as a starting point. To my mind, it is becoming increasingly difficult (and uninteresting) to say something new about the conflict (especially if discussing why it started in the first place). Obviously, this particular piece of work looks at Sierra Leone a decade down the road, and as stated above, I would like the analysis and the whole presentation of the book to put less emphasis on the war. I won't make that point again. While I think that the book proposal does a good job of outlining competing volumes in the latter part, it does not really make references in the first half. It does not really discuss this literature or make reference to it in the first part. Again, I have not seen the intro, but it is crucial, given the sheer number of books written about Sierra Leone during and after the war, that the book is positioned well. This will also help the various chapters greatly in the sense that we'll understand why they have been included. I am not asking for a literature review in the proposal, but it would have been helpful if a clearer and less schematic discussion of how the volume differs from already existing literature had been integrated more in its first half. The fact that it hasn't makes the proposal stand a bit policy-like, and I don't think that's the intention of the authors. 4) What are the strengths and weaknesses of the proposal? You may wish to consider structure, organization, coherence and presentation of material; scope, coverage and breadth of appeal or degree of specialization; whether there are any obvious omissions; timeliness and likely shelf-life of the research; what proportion of the work, if any, will require substantial re-working; and whether any suggested improvements fundamental to the project's success or discretionary matters which might be addressed after the project has been accepted. Many of the issues raised in this section, I have touched on above. One topic that I do think is missing is a strong analysis of current political life in Sierra Leone, and what the implications of APC taking over from SLPP in 2007 have been for Sierra Leone. What is the difference in how the two parties have ruled Sierra Leone? 5) Do you feel the author/editor is suitably qualified to produce a high quality book on this topic? I don't know who the editor is, so I couldn't say whether he/she is qualified or not. 6) If you are aware that the book is being considered for inclusion in a specific series, please comment on its suitability for that series. N/A Market and Competition 7) Is this book likely to have interdisciplinary and/or international appeal? Because it is very much focused on Sierra Leone, and because I haven't seen the intro, you would, as it stands, need to have an interest in the country to pick it up. But I do think that with a good intro, that includes perspectives on other countries, it could be picked up more generally. As I have a particular interest in Sierra Leone, I would make sure that DIIS' library has a copy and would consider buying a copy myself too. 8) How does this proposal compare to the main competing titles in this area in terms of quality of writing and content? Because the book is quite specific, there is to my knowledge no competing title, however, it would also be problematic if there were many of its kind. The market is not big enough for that. Recommendation I would recommend that you publish the book, but also that the authors sharpen the proposal considerably according to my suggestions above (I really would like to see the introduction when it's available). It's an important contribution by researchers and practitioners from Sierra Leone, and I think they have an important role in articulating and discussing developments within their own country. I do think that as most written work, the book requires a strong language editor. I would definitely be willing to provide an endorsement. As I said above, this is an important book by a number of Sierra Leoneans - some of whom I know well - and I think they deserve a strong voice in the debate on their own country.
